Not bad. Some areas could do with some work but overall the animation was good.
I'd recommend that you pay attention the the camera work, I'm guessing that you're probably using vcam in this, which makes things easier, although in places I'd say the camera work is a little jumpy in places.
Also the sound quality left a little to be desired. Try and improve on the quality of the vocals if you can by either exporting the flash with a higher audio bit rate, or use a better microphone.
On the whole, a good animation.
I need to find a way to get decent audio quality without raping file size, seeing as it's pretty hefty even now with fairly dodgy audio =\
Not bad for your first flash. I gave it a 3/5
Improve the sound quality and timings. And I'll up my rating to 4!
Not bad. I gave it a 3/5
It dosent deserve to be blammed.
How about making a longer one next time?
its a series of shots.
i only give bits at a time, to keep you wanting more :(
It was ok, the interactivity is cool, if somewhat unepected.
Get some of the timings sorted out, and perhaps a more interesting preloaded, and youve got a good movie there.
I didn't think the preloader needed special treatment as the actual animation! Alright then. this is why most users like me. because, I listen to there sudgestions. Next time around I will add a little somthing to spice up the preloader. Thanks for the review!
Turn up the volume on the voices slightly and its a winner.
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