...da'fuk did I just watch? Please, I have no idea.

Although it was really well animated and I can't fault it on a technical level....it was just...really weird.

Quite good

Not bad. Some areas could do with some work but overall the animation was good.

I'd recommend that you pay attention the the camera work, I'm guessing that you're probably using vcam in this, which makes things easier, although in places I'd say the camera work is a little jumpy in places.

Also the sound quality left a little to be desired. Try and improve on the quality of the vocals if you can by either exporting the flash with a higher audio bit rate, or use a better microphone.

On the whole, a good animation.

8/10

Dude....

That was SERIOUSLY fucked up....really weird and quite creepy.

Even more creepy than, dare I say it, Salad Fingers. Keep it up!

Not Bad

No bad for your first game. Like other people have said though, lag is an issue

Try reducing the graphical quality, or cleaning up the actionscript slightly, that may speed the game up. Also, if you've used a few external AS files, you could try reducing the number of them. Or if all the code is in the actual fla file, try using some external AS files if you know how to use them. That way the game will have less code to process and will run abit quicker.

It's worth a try anyway, I'll admit my actionscripting knowledge isnt briliant, but I'm familiar with it.

mousels

Not bad...

Not bad for your first game. I know how hard it is to make a flash game and you've done pretty well.

Some improvements however would be to make the character fall quicker, also make it so that the character can shoot while jumping.

In regards to enemies, the hit areas on the Bookface enemies needs some work, some of the bullets I fired at it just seemed to go through.

On the whole, a good solid game, keep it up.

8/10

Ya know

Ya know something, that was actually quite good. A fair bit of coding has gone behind that. Add a way of saving your progress, or possibly exporting the image as an image file to the desktop (I think thats possible). Also, have different styles of "ink".

On the whole, quite good. Use it as a basis for something bigger and you could be onto something quite interesting.

3/5

Awesome

Beautiful, that's all I can really say, simply beautiful.