mousels's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Orange Runner]

Not Bad

No bad for your first game. Like other people have said though, lag is an issue

Try reducing the graphical quality, or cleaning up the actionscript slightly, that may speed the game up. Also, if you've used a few external AS files, you could try reducing the number of them. Or if all the code is in the actual fla file, try using some external AS files if you know how to use them. That way the game will have less code to process and will run abit quicker.

It's worth a try anyway, I'll admit my actionscripting knowledge isnt briliant, but I'm familiar with it.

mousels

Maxwelldoggums responds:

I really don't experience any lag at all! but ok, I'll do that. Thanks

[Elektric Drawingz]

Ya know

Ya know something, that was actually quite good. A fair bit of coding has gone behind that. Add a way of saving your progress, or possibly exporting the image as an image file to the desktop (I think thats possible). Also, have different styles of "ink".

On the whole, quite good. Use it as a basis for something bigger and you could be onto something quite interesting.

3/5

liam responds:

YOU'RE BEING SO NICE. The truth is, I thought of this while doodling at college today and threw it together in about 20 minutes (would have been quicker but I haven't used the new flash coding language {AS3} in quite a while). I submitted as a joke, sort of.. but thanks for the great response and I really am gonna make a 'sequel' with all this crap people are suggesting lolol :D