Turn up the volume on the voices slightly and its a winner.
Not bad mate, not bad
Not bad. Get the sound sorted out, and perhaps a play/replay button added and your onto a winner.
Infact, adding a play button at the start of the animation may sort out your sound issues. But dont hold me to that.
Fix it, resubmit it, and i'll up my rating of this peice.
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